First of all, this is a rewritten article. But I changed the research question. I will provide first draft, rubric, and comments. (My first draft is C+ If the rubric picture is not clear, please contact me at 1272128907@qq.com) I hope this is an A or A- article.
Second, this article requires the use of rhetorical situation and other requirements in rubric. The reference format is APA format.
Third, I have a reference to the citation in the article. (In the writing requirements)
Fourth, I also give examples of the behavior of research.
Fifth, citation and behavior can not to make major changes.
Sixth, please complete as soon as possible. If I take A, I will give you extra money.
Thank you very much!
